Titles are hard. Very. They have to do so many things at once. They have to give an idea of what the book is about, without giving too much of an idea. They have to show what genre the book falls into. Have you ever noticed how different genres have different sorts of titles? They also have to keep up with the latest fashions, or consciously decide not to. Remember when the wonderful novel was published called The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-time? For a year or so after, a book had to have a long, multi-claused title to make it to the shelves, or so it seemed.
I actually like coming up with titles. It’s a bit like playing scrabble with your eyes closed. You come up with words that go together but you try not to be too editorial about it. And very often one possibility interlocks with another. Although I’ve talked in more detail about how the title “A Clash of Innocents” came into being here, here’s a little list of some of my titles’ evolutions:
my first novel: An Unlikely Guru + A Variable Constant became Tangled Roots
my play: Table for One became The Bistro Down the Road
my second novel: An Everywhere of Innocents became A Clash of Innocents
my play: Touch became Touch Me There became Touching Joy
my poetry collection: Tripartite became A Woman’s Life became Her Life Collected
I’m thinking about all this now because I am about a third of the way through the first draft of my wip and usually by this time I am amassing a list of possible titles. Or at least I’m getting some ideas of sound, structure and emphasis. But so far, I’ve got nothing. Nothing. I keep telling myself not to worry, the title will just pop into my head when I least expect it. One day I’ll be staring out the window, like I was when writing A Clash of Innocents, and BOOM – there it will be, the titular lightening bolt. I’m actually staring out the window right now and….wait a minute….how about……
That’s a fascinating insight into how you come up with titles. Thanks for sharing.
Interesting to see the development…i seem to begin with the title and go from there…
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I’m curious Sue, were the title changes yours or suggested by the publisher? I just had the title of my YA that’s coming out changed. It was Aunt Lulu and has been changed to Signed, Hopelessly in Love. I’m actually quite happy about the change though I had thought I was an author who knew a good title. In this case I was wrong. I think as writers we need to be flexible on this.
Thanks Helen.
Liz: I used to begin with the title, too. But now it’s seemed to change, which is what got me thinking about it. Funny, eh?
Lauri: These were all my changes, though I often ask people what they think while I’m deciding. I’ve never had a publisher make a title change. That feels weird to me, though. I’m not sure how I would take it, although I know it happens all the time.
I love thinking up titles, but it can be so difficult. You’re so good at your titles, I’m sure you’ll think of one very soon.